homepage copy to fix #13733

docs/index.html

@@ -6,8 +6,7 @@ title: Bootstrap
 <main class="bs-docs-masthead" id="content" role="main">
   <div class="container">
     <span class="bs-docs-booticon bs-docs-booticon-lg bs-docs-booticon-outline">B</span>
-    <!-- <h1>Bootstrap</h1> -->
-    <p class="lead">The most popular front-end framework for developing responsive, mobile first projects on the web.</p>
+    <p class="lead">Bootstrap is the most popular HTML, CSS, and JS framework for developing responsive, mobile first projects on the web.</p>
     <p class="lead">
       <a href="getting-started#download" class="btn btn-outline-inverse btn-lg" onclick="ga('send', 'event', 'Jumbotron actions', 'Download', 'Download {{ site.current_version }}');">Download Bootstrap</a>
     </p>
@@ -27,17 +26,17 @@ title: Bootstrap
       <div class="col-sm-4">
         <img src="assets/img/sass-less.png" alt="Sass and Less support" class="img-responsive">
         <h3>Preprocessors</h3>
-        <p>In addition to vanilla CSS, Bootstrap includes support for the two most popular CSS preprocessors, <a href="../css/#less">Less</a> and <a href="../css/#sass">Sass</a>.</p>
+        <p>Bootstrap ships as vanilla CSS, as well as support for the two most popular CSS preprocessors, <a href="../css/#less">Less</a> and <a href="../css/#sass">Sass</a>. Quickly get started with precompiled CSS or build on the source code.</p>
       </div>
       <div class="col-sm-4">
         <img src="assets/img/devices.png" alt="Responsive across devices" class="img-responsive">
         <h3>One framework, every device.</h3>
-        <p>Bootstrap easily and efficiently scales your project with one code base, from phones to tablets to desktops.</p>
+        <p>Bootstrap easily and efficiently scales your websites and applications with a single code base, from phones to tablets to desktops with CSS media queries.</p>
       </div>
       <div class="col-sm-4">
         <img src="assets/img/components.png" alt="Components" class="img-responsive">
-        <h3>Comprehensive docs</h3>
-        <p>With Bootstrap, you get extensive and beautiful documentation with hundreds of live examples, code snippets, and more.</p>
+        <h3>Full of features</h3>
+        <p>With Bootstrap, you get extensive and beautiful documentation for common HTML elements, dozens of custom HTML and CSS components, and awesome jQuery plugins.</p>
       </div>
     </div>