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Rubin0 t1_ja6n4j9 wrote

Heads up that the site is pretty difficult to read on mobile. The text sizing is a little odd and the graphics are way too small. The other issue is that there is a LOT of text to scroll through. I’d recommend trying to make the homepage as lean as possible and move the details to a separate page for folks who want more info

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jhkoenig OP t1_ja6oyz9 wrote

Thank you for this feedback! May I ask what phone you are using? I only have an iPhone for real-world testing. Did you check out the "View Demo Account" functionality? If so, how did that look on your phone?

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Rubin0 t1_ja6rhx8 wrote

iPhone 7.

So, being blunt, I didn’t end up clicking any links because I wasn’t hooked and there was too much to read. There needs to be a single line that defines what makes your product great at the very top that convinces your users that it’s worth going further.

As someone who has gone through lots of job searches, I haven’t used paper submissions in decades so implying that your software is better at tracking than paper makes it seem super outdated. Focus on why it is valuable to the user and sell it in a single statement.

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