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I_am_notthatguy t1_j63usl0 wrote

So I like it. It just feels like the beginning of a song. I felt like I was waiting for it to ramp up into something more and then it didn't. I do like it tho, just not a lot. I'm posting this criticism because you seemed open to it in another comment. And good on you for it

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microice2795 OP t1_j63v10a wrote

Yeah of course, I appreciate your opinion and it's something that helps me learn.

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Trizzae t1_j640r48 wrote

Yeah to add to this, you repeat the same chord progression throughout the whole song. Like most modern music today. Production and everything else is solid. I like the laid back vibe and the silky guitars.

If I could suggest listening to some older music and hear how much they change progressions, key, tempo, bridges, pre-choruses, etc. Just to break up the monotomy of the song structure and keep the ear guessing. I've been learning a lot about this from Rick Beato's channel where he breaks down all music. He's helped me analyze my old music and how I can make it more sonically interesting. Keep it up!

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fruitybrisket t1_j6425bg wrote

Keep it up mate. As others have implied, the vocals aren't great on pace and feel a bit monotonous but that's all we can point out.

But also, fuck what anyone thinks and please just keep making art.

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MulticoloredCatMug t1_j641e3i wrote

I has the same feeling. Like I was just waiting for something interesting to happen

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