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microice2795 OP t1_j63v10a wrote

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Trizzae t1_j640r48 wrote

Yeah to add to this, you repeat the same chord progression throughout the whole song. Like most modern music today. Production and everything else is solid. I like the laid back vibe and the silky guitars.

If I could suggest listening to some older music and hear how much they change progressions, key, tempo, bridges, pre-choruses, etc. Just to break up the monotomy of the song structure and keep the ear guessing. I've been learning a lot about this from Rick Beato's channel where he breaks down all music. He's helped me analyze my old music and how I can make it more sonically interesting. Keep it up!

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fruitybrisket t1_j6425bg wrote

Keep it up mate. As others have implied, the vocals aren't great on pace and feel a bit monotonous but that's all we can point out.

But also, fuck what anyone thinks and please just keep making art.

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