Hi kat! Wow, what an amazing twist. You did a really good job portraying Edwin's sleaziness. The way he tried to undermine Sally and then force the casting couch on her was quite true to life. I liked the shot she took at his classism at the end as well.

As for crit, I think I'd have liked to see more foreshadowing for the plan and Mrs Carothers' reveal in more detail. Mostly because I want to see that mix of anger and contempt she must have for her husband tbh.

Good words!