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Nightchildd t1_j8qqzeu wrote

Reply to comment by thoughtsthoughtof in [OT] Poetry Corner: Fire! by OldBayJ

I agree, however look closer at the first letter of each line haha. I also tried to keep it rhyming and struggled to keep it light

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thoughtsthoughtof t1_j8qunsl wrote

Oh did you want it to be completely general struggles or did u have more idea of potential meanings for inner war maybe just without it after peel instead be peeled and to have her seeds used maybe

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