Submitted by gymleader_michael t3_115j1mh in WritingPrompts
Meepsicle83 t1_j95ids8 wrote
Reply to comment by Aquamarine_ze_dragon in [WP] God, demigod, guardian--Every time mankind finds you, during a different age, they give you a title representative of your otherworldly power. You aren't getting weaker, yet your title gets diluted each time until finally, a group of humans think you're just a homeless person who needs help. by gymleader_michael
I love this, reads like an excerpt from an interesting longer story and wraps its scene up well.
And why shouldn't it be a fishhook? :)
I'm reading some Neil Gaiman short stories and your 'snapshot' style is reminiscent of some of his.
Please pretend that I have given you an award with the coins I don't have!
Aquamarine_ze_dragon t1_j96xsiq wrote
Thanks, this is only my second time writing one of these. Criticism welcome.
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