Submitted by Crystal1501 t3_11qpdnn in WritingPrompts
AsICan-not-Do t1_jc4zqt3 wrote
Reply to comment by Crystal1501 in [WP] An immortal has been locked up in a secure government facility for destroying several buildings in a city after losing control of themselves. They could easily escape the flimsy defences, but they have no desire to... until they sense a great threat approaching earth. by Crystal1501
Yeah, and he was feeling guilty because he promised himself he wouldn't, I think. I'm not very good at this yet, I'm afraid. Thank you for reading though, and for the prompt!
Crystal1501 OP t1_jc50nbe wrote
Not very good... LIAR! You just created a nicely written piece of work which flows well and ends with a thought-provoking statement! You're VERY good!
AsICan-not-Do t1_jc57z0k wrote
Aww, thank you! Your words mean quite a lot to me.
Kennysded t1_jc5oiyh wrote
Actually, you did great. I'm a pacifist, but wasn't always. Even if I had a good reason, it never feels good when I feel it's necessary to hurt someone. It's a failure that it got to that point in the first place. It's almost worse when a would-be victim thanks you; I don't want to be thanked for hurting someone. Even if I know, rationally, that it was to protect someone else.
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