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chacham2 OP t1_itokvhc wrote

Reply to comment by killznhealz in [WP] You wake up disoriented when offered some rags to cover your naked body. Eventually, you remember you were king. A coup used an arcane spell to change your looks and displace you, leaving only your family's birthmark. People assume you are dead, but the new ruler is still looking to kill you. by chacham2

No, is pretty good. Sorry if my response wasn't long enough. :)

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killznhealz t1_itol1xu wrote

Lol. Just vague and I wrote a ton with hardly any climax so I could 110% understand people not really feeling that one. Either way I appreciate it.

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chacham2 OP t1_iton78d wrote

I enjoyed it just read it with my wife.

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