Submitted by MidgardWyrm t3_ydwy8h in WritingPrompts
Optimal-Audience-998 t1_itz7azn wrote
“That’s it” I said. “I’m tired of this” as I walk outside to my porch. I see a gnome and many other things out there. They all look shocked cause I have been scared of them from childhood. But today was the day I found out why they wanted to help me so bad. I walk up to the gnome and ask why all of them want to help me so bad. The gnome is pale white but peeps out a “what.” I say”what do you mean what” the gnome says”you should probably sit down for this.” I tell them to come inside so we can chat. We’re all sitting down. The gnome says”your life Is not real” my jaw drops. “What do you mean it’s not real” the gnome says “well you are in a coma and we have been put in your mind as something that would stick out to you. So we could try and talk you out of the coma.” I reply with “that still doesn’t explain why you try to help me out” the gnome shakes his head and says “it’s not that easy and if I get in to bad of a state or die in this coma land. I might not be able to come back.” I start to feel tears running down my face because I knew what they said weren’t lies. They couldn’t be. The gnome said I could go home but it might hurt and they just needed a notice from me to do it. I said “yes” in a very very depressing state of mind. I’m instantly everyone was gone. And I felt my legs start cramping then my arms then everything felt like it was being cut into by 30 different saws. My body then felt cold then so hot I almost killed myself. And then boom. My vision went black and I woke on a bed in a hospital and Disney know what to do. Then a nurse came in saying “good your awake” I was shaking.then the nurse said “we’re Hanna run some test to see if your ok. You were gone for about 10 years. I was shocked. I laid back and closed my eyes. Then the nurse put some medicine in my IV and I woke up in my home again but. It was my real home with my wife and kids? I said out loud. My wife told me she would have to re instate me back into this world. I was worried but trusted her. And then she helped me over the years come back into my self. After awhile I felt normal again.
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