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AShellfishLover t1_it3t7iw wrote

The temple had fallen.

She stood alone, set to guard the greatest treasures of her Faith. There had been warnings from the men; cruel japes and vivid descriptions. For her own safety, they had said, they had placed her there, at the protection of the children. They warned her of the horrors of what would happen if she fell, and she felt the first tears to fall since she wept in joy over her elevation as Guardian of the Faith.

She prayed to her god, and feared her doubt would make that prayer fall on deaf ears. Her god smiled down, Her beauty beaming as she held the blessed earth within her outstretched arms. Her order was not one of war but of peace and love. This holy temple was desecrated by the presence of the Horde.

She heard them pillaging, the tearing of tapestries and the smashing of holy statuary. She felt no fear but a deep resignation. The Horde's press had filled the sky with dust for hours before their arrival, and she was but one stone standing in a tide of brutality. The false wall behind the High Priest's quarters would hide her charges only so long.

Lady of the Quiet Places, hear my prayer. Know that I, your servant in full, stand resolved to defend your people. Bless me with the strength to raise arms, the wisdom to guide my blade truly, and the serenity of death eternal with your Host if I shall fall this day. In your name I declare my life, on this day if it be my last.

She heard the screams of the High Priest as the Horde broke into his chamber. Their guttural voices grinding through the stones of the false wall. The striking of His holy flesh, the Anointed and Promised husband to her Lady in this world. Her children, the children who had been sent from the cities that knew of the advancing Horde, trembled behind her. She turned to see the smallest of them, a girl no more than five whose feet the Guardian had cleaned and bandaged herself, bury her head into the rags of her elder brother.

They will sacrifice the children to their bestial goddess. It would be a blessing. A true blessing. Only a sip, and they will pass into an eternal sleep. No pain there. the High Priest had given her the skin before she was walled in, inured and kept from the battle to protect the children from the Horde. Even if not from her own Treachery.

She gripped the hilt of her sword and stood tall as the hammers started their ringing on the wall.

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AShellfishLover t1_it3wdzb wrote

The hammers fell and she questioned whether it was time. She realized then that she did not have the will to do it. A life taken in righteous combat? She was not above that. But what the Horde would do would be a cruelty. She did not have the courage to do what she must, and the children would suffer.

She shook her head, and decided then that they would not have the children.

She held each of them as she started.

"One sip, don't worry about the bitterness, it will all be better soon." the lie leapt out of her mouth just ahead of the nausea.

She had been traded from her parents due to her piety, and they had... it was a hard road here. She wondered if it was her treatment that had hardened her. When she told the Guardian Primal of what they had done he had chided her, asked why she had not dressed as a boy to hide herself.

It was then that she refused to unsex herself for their desire. They wanted her to bind herself, to accept their crude glances as she dressed and undressed in the page's chambers. The first hands had been met with fists. The second with a knife.

They had called her cold, unwilling to drink with them when they snuck off during Devotion. The life of a Guardian's wife was far better than signing into the Book of the Blessed. She refused their proposals, their advances. She became strong, but ready to attack anyone who touched her, prepared to kill to defend her temple.

By the time she had given the last draught the first hole appeared. It was a matter of minutes before the chamber was opened wide enough for the first of them to come through. It was a thin creature, its skin the colors of the evergreens of the Guardian's homeland. She hadn't thought of that place of long winters since she arrived there, not yet a woman. Now, she prepared to strike and thought of that place.

Her sword struck true, and she saw the shock in the monster's eyes. Unarmed and unarmored, a scout. The blade glowed in the dark where its blood poured, and she saw what it carried.

Herbs. A pot, and herbs. The smell of the herbs was medicinal and sweet, and the tattoos of the creature showed in its lifeblood's light. Soft whirls of black and red, the glinting of stones in the beast's hair, milky pink quartz and bright blue lapis.

"Mirhapad. Djulad. Mama' Djuladi." the beast fell, but she had learned enough of the monster's tongue. Fool. Healer. I have come to heal you.

The cries of the Hordemen outside were deafening. They pounded at the walls as they tore the false stones away, rending with tools and bare clawed hands. The opening was widened, and the healer was drawn out as a tall monster in a set of armor stormed in, dragging the High Priest by his hair. The armor was close to her own, and the monster opened its mouth in shock.

"What have you done? WHAT HAVE YOU DONE?" it demanded in the Guardian's language, its voice full of... anguish? Despair?

She didn't even have time to respond before the beastly knight lifted the High Priest, breaking the poor man's neck with the effort of wringing life from a plump hen.

The soft susurrus of released energy filled the room, and around the Guardian a dozen children, once human and now in the shape of beast whelps, lay in dreamless sleep.

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AShellfishLover t1_it3y31z wrote

She readied herself for her deserved death with the calm of a penitent. So many things fell into place. The beastknight rushed towards her... then past, grabbing up the young girl and her brother in his arms and letting out a roar that shook the dust from the walls of the hiding place. The hordesmen answered, and she heard the swell fill the temple.

More beasts began to flood the room, two tattooed healers looking over the children, another trying to staunch the blood flowing from the healer the Guardian had run through. As the beastknight rocked its children back and forth, she heard the monster letting out a low prayer.

Gaad ti'Shilul-zorad, saniadai uldrod busul rosharichad, filpra-nod brandul mamadal siatazor. Blessed Mother of Quiet Places, I call to you your blessed mercy, hear my prayer, your loyal servant, though I am far from my homeland.

She looked at the armor the beastknight wore, and saw the enamel working on their breastplate. A green set of clawed hands, holding the earth between its fingers.

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Gaelhelemar t1_it6rji3 wrote

It was at this moment she realized she had fucked up. There’s more to this, right? She hasn’t yet been set upon by the Horde for murder/mercy killing or chastised by them.

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Bealf t1_it6wz0u wrote

Soooooo, this is really good! Any chance of a final act or an explanation for why she didn’t realize the kids were orc kids? I’m a little confused at that part.

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AShellfishLover t1_it95cts wrote

I give myself an hr with a prompt and then bounce to something new or back to work on my own work/actually employment.

The commenter below pretty much got it. In my mind's eye the Faith has indoctrinated our protag into not seeing herself for who she is, with the High Priest using a glammer to alter her perception. If I decided to work on this piece I'd add clarity, but this and other stuff I post are sprints to get ready for Nanowrimo on another project.

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Bealf t1_it9xbed wrote

Fair enough! Thanks for checking back in!

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Gaelhelemar t1_it9ybzo wrote

And here I was thinking that the Orcs worshipped the same god as the knight did, and so it upended her worldview to learn that their "bloodthirsty goddess" was literally her own god.

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AShellfishLover t1_it9yg9m wrote

It's also that as well. You see, like other Green-skinned creatures that start with O, it has layers.

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DarkKechup t1_it7ghy0 wrote

I think she was Orc, too, no? Indoctrinated to think she was human? Or did I misunderstand?

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Bealf t1_it8m5vq wrote

I believe you are correct

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