Submitted by Seabass9975 t3_yit32k in WritingPrompts
Fuji-Jufi t1_iuobp0z wrote
Reply to comment by Fuji-Jufi in [WP] You’ve always had a forceful personality. Whenever you direct someone to do something, they always follow your instructions, no matter how outlandish. You’ve gotten used to everyone doing what you tell them to, which is why you’re surprised when someone finally says “no.” by Seabass9975
I stare at the empty seat across from me, stunned for yet a third time in mere minutes. She’s gone. The first real thing in my life, and I don’t even know if she was real at all. When? I thought. When did I become so reliant on others to blindly follow my will, that I myself had gone blind with complacency. Letting life slowly pass me by. Content in drinking away my sorrows. No. No more. I jumped out of my seat.
“Bartender!!” I squealed
“That woman, where did she go?”
“She just left.” He replied in a calm robotic demeanor. Good, I thought, she was real after all.
“Which way did she-“ I catch myself. This was the problem wasn’t it. Right here. I had stopped living life and had started letting others live it for me. They were my eyes and ears. My willing full puppets to string along in anyway I saw fit. No never-mind that, This is no time to question the past! The woman, where did she go? I turned my attention back to the bartender.
“Bartender, which way did she head out?” I hastily said again, this time firm in my resolve. He pointed out the side door, and I ran out after her.
The rain has picked up and from under the bars awning, I can see only a few feet in front of me. Damn it. Which way should I go?
Suddenly, I see a figure heading down the side-road, running perpendicular to the window we just sat at. I run after them.
“Hey wait! Waiitttt!” I yelled, as I run across traffic towards the side-road.
“You there, Stoppp.” I yelled again, to no avail, they kept going. It must be her, anyone else would listen, right?
I ran fast. As fast as my legs could carry me, but when I catch up, I stand alone at a dead end. Not a trace of the person I had just seen. Damn it, where could she have gone? I slither back to the hotel in defeat. Upon arrival, I head to my room and lay down on the bed.
I lie awake, my mind uneasy from the day's events. That woman who was she? I was missing something, had I been there before? she said it was her favorite spot, but I’d never seen her there before. Have I? Ughhh, what was it?
The next day, I head back to the bar.
“Bartender, let me see your security tapes. All of them” I say pointing to the camera behind the bar. He obliges and brings me to a room behind the counter, I sit down and start scrolling through the tapes.
"Leave me." I say to the bartender, who promptly leaves, shutting the door behind him. I start with the moment I met the woman and scroll backwards determined to find her.
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Thanks for all the support this far! Here it is u/Seabass9975, u/chielachristina, u/thecheesyB, u/DilithiumMiner, u/PresentationOk1717
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The Voice That Blinds Him [Part 3+4]
Thanks for the support Everyone! I’ve made a subreddit if you’d like to keep following along!
hahegdyshgwgd t1_iup3jhz wrote
im so hooked on to this story
Fuji-Jufi t1_iup7ika wrote
Thanks for the Support! I made a subreddit to continue it! Unfortunately, I probably won’t get done today, but I’m working on Part 4!
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