Submitted by DragoTheFloof t3_z6uz37 in WritingPrompts
SirPiecemaker t1_iy3n555 wrote
"May you accept this humble offering, oh gods, and watch over me on my travels," I said quietly as I a piece of meat into the fire and bit into the rest.
"You know," a gravely voice suddenly rang out behind me, "I prefer my meat un-burnt."
I darted upwards and turned to see whoever spoke; it was rare for anyone to sneak up on me. A lifetime on the road taught me better. Stranger still, the man before me was old and frail. I was surprised he approached me without snapping a bone, let alone any branches to make a sound.
"Oh, please, please, don't get up," he smiled and walked closer to the fire as if my hand wasn't on the hilt of my sword. "Really. Sit. You're making me feel rude," he chuckled and, with a loud grunt, sat down.
I could see him better now that he was by the fire. He looked well over 70, his face wrinkled and tired, and only wore dusty old rags. A beggar, likely.
"Who are you?" I asked as I sat back down.
"Just a traveller," he said casually. Then, without a sound, he leaned forward and reached into the fire. His hand remained in it for several seconds before he pulled it out holding the piece of meat I threw in. The offering. He put it in his mouth and chewed - I could see that neither his hand nor his rags bore any burn marks.
"You're..." I gasped.
"Yep."
I stood up again, only to fall to my knees.
"Please forgive me, o' Hermes, for I did-"
"Oh please, sit down!" he growled. "Can't stand all this grovelling. You've been on your feet all day, take it easy, will you?"
Slowly, carefully, I resumed my position by the fire but kept staring at him with wide eyes, unsure of what to do next.
"Eat," he commanded. I carefully bit into the meat.
"You're wondering why I'm here, sitting with you, aren't you, Lavrentios?"
I nodded. I couldn't force myself to speak, too afraid of saying something wrong.
He smiled. "Sorry to disappoint, but there is no grand reveal. I'm not about to send you on a mighty quest filled with peril. I just wanted some company. But, if I am not mistaken," he said and his eyes briefly lit up with a golden light, "you are relieved to hear that."
"...yes. Yes, I am."
"I respect that. A man that likes his place in the world. Rare nowadays, I'll say."
He reached deep into his robe and produced a waterskin that he took a long sip out of before offering it to me. I carefully accepted and took a swig - it was wine. The best wine I had ever tasted in my mortal life. I swiftly took another gulp before handing it back.
"Thank you," I said quietly.
"I like you, Lavrentios," he suddenly opened. "You're humble. Pious, but not zealous. A capable messenger," he said and nodded towards the bag sitting beside me. "Are you happy with your lot in life?"
"Of course, o' Hermes!" I spurted out quickly.
His eyes glowed gold again.
"Certainly not that happy, but I understand you're nervous talking to me."
He took a deep breath, taking in the fresh night air.
"But," he said, "about your offerings."
Cold sweat ran down my forehead. He reached into his robes again, pulling out... a silver coin. He placed it on a nearby stump and as he did, the moonlight hit it at just the right angle to shine straight into my eyes, forcing me to wince. When I opened them again, the man was nowhere to be seen, though I could hear his voice echo all around me.
"Place them beside the fire next time, would you?"
WoodsTellsTales t1_iy41a51 wrote
Well done!
Story-bot t1_iy406ve wrote
Seems like a good story, u/SirPiecemaker
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