Submitted by WoollerMan2003 t3_z8b3a6 in WritingPrompts
Reformed_Narcissist t1_iybsslg wrote
Reply to comment by Ilyaev_Art in [WP] You are constantly mocked for having such a weird superpower by all the other heroes. “The power to make anything into perfectly cooked soup”… One day, a massive meteor is barreling towards earth. As all the other heroes are panicking, you wait perfectly calm, at the impact zone, bowl in hand. by WoollerMan2003
It is chronological and situational.
Dread felt at the news of something.
Calm felt when facing it.
Ilyaev_Art t1_iycp11z wrote
OP edited it, I understood the context but saying one feeling in one sentence and in the other an opposite sentence is a bit jarring.
It could have been fixed pretty easily by using a word like "but then.." etc to indicate the mood had changed.
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