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xHexical t1_j1tfql2 wrote

Reply to comment by Enigma1984 in [WP] You died and awoke in the afterlife. It's quite nice actually. The people and atmosphere are a lot nicer than you are used to and there is no stress or pressure. When you ask what good deed got you into heaven you are informed that this is hell, followed by a visit from a very concerned demon. by Kitty_Fuchs

I really enjoyed your characterization of hell. To be honest, the “if we are to be alone together forever” line made me think it was going to turn into a romance there for a second lol

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Enigma1984 t1_j1vh8ht wrote

Yeh I wrote it quite late at night. It could do with an edit if I'm honest, a few little bits of clunky language like that and some repetition. I'm happy with the ideas behind it though.

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