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guandaor t1_j28uelc wrote

You’ve duplicated the paragraph that begins “Now, hypothetically,” and it confused me a little because the first occurrence of it didn’t make sense.

That aside, I really liked this! They are sweet. “Never change” haha!

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A_Very_StrangeQuark t1_j2baf1m wrote

Thank you!! I can't seem to deal with reddit editing haha, have fixed that, thanks for letting me know.

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