Federal_Penalty5832 t1_j5c3ljd wrote
"Time Traveler's Dilemma"
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In a world of endless space and time,
A patient came to me, a troubled mind.
He claimed to be a traveler from the past,
Sent to destroy the cause of humanity's last.
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But every test I gave, it all came back clear,
His mind was sound, without a trace of fear.
And yet he swore, with utmost conviction,
That he had lived through history's collision.
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I listened with a curious ear,
To tales of war and pain and fear.
He spoke of futures dark and grim,
And how he worked to change the paradigm.
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But what is real, and what is not,
In this mind that's caught in thought?
Is he a savior, or just insane,
Lost in a world of grief and pain?
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I can't say for sure, but one thing's true,
His story's captured my imagination too.
And in the end, that's all that matters,
The tales we tell, and how they scatter.
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In the mind of this patient, lost in time,
A tale unfolds, both true and sublime.
Though it may not be fact, it's worth the retelling,
A hero's journey, a story worth dwelling.
Life-Raspberry-5076 t1_j5i3ewo wrote
I really enjoyed the story portrayed through brevity. The rhythm is very catchy and song-like.
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