Submitted by chacham2 t3_10jinpg in WritingPrompts
ReblQueen t1_j5m4vh4 wrote
Reply to comment by PrayzM in [WP] As a necromancer, you are in the business of reanimating the dead for a few days at a time. Families say goodbye, businesses get cooperate secrets, scientists test their drugs, etc. The more they pay, the better they are restored and the longer they stay, as it does take a lot out of you. by chacham2
That was a bit confusing. Why did the necromancer need money to bring Lya back? Was Cain a go between for customers? It's got a good premise overall but could be clearer.
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