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icychill4 t1_j5k875v wrote

Reply to comment by Writteninsanity in [WP] A bar called “The Alibi” that’s notorious for being just that.. an alibi. Often packed with ex-cons, the customers of The Alibi adhere to a silent, but strict, code: If they say they were here, we saw them. They’ll always back an alibi, no questions asked. by JelloStaplerr

Wow, I really want to know what happens next!!

Great work

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Writteninsanity t1_j5kcjsy wrote

Thanks!

For what it matters, there isn't going to be a follow-up to this one. The central tension set up is Alibi needing to break its one rule, the framing of the story could have been about anything as long as that was the central drama.

Now that the drama is solved, I would be changing the theme of the story to move to 'the mystery' as the central tension, which is fine but wasn't the intent here. Gotta love the writing stuff.

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icychill4 t1_j5kd63k wrote

Oh man, I respect your decision to not have a follow up.. but it's going to be another writing prompt post that I'll be up late at night thinking about and trying to complete in my head 😅

You're very talented..

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