Submitted by Einherjar-warrior t3_10ifjoi in WritingPrompts
Quetzhal t1_j5ehjrf wrote
Reply to comment by Quetzhal in [WP] You've just gotten home to your spouse, when a group of demons, orcs, centaurs, vampires, goblins and other monsters burst in. One of them addresses your spouse, saying "My Lord. The time has come. We are ready. We shall ride into battle by your side, mighty Godslayer." You are confused. by Einherjar-warrior
"Nathei..."
My voice is soft. The Dark Lord kneels in front of the crushed bed of flowers, staring at them rather despondently; I sigh. I know how important they are to him, and it kills me that I didn't think to install some sort of protective ward over them.
Though to be fair, I hadn't exactly expected an entire invading force to land on our doorstep.
It's fine, he tells me. We'll just grow a new one.
"This one was important to you, though." I take a flower from the bed - the one that seems healthiest and least crushed. The stem is a little broken, but the petals are nearly entirely intact; they're a wonderful mixed shade of blue and pink and white. It's one of his favorites, if I remember correctly, because they remind him of me.
A small application of healing magic heals the broken stem. "We'll keep this one for the next flowerbed," I say. "And install some wards next time."
Thank you. Nathei composed himself. Some would say I care too much.
"Yeah, well, fuck 'em." I shrug. "They didn't spend thirty years under a perception curse that prevented them from seeing anything positive about the world."
Nathei is silent for a moment. Do you have any leads yet on that?
I don't look at him when I respond.
"Yeah," I say. "I think... I think it might be one of the gods."
Expert-Pomegranate-8 t1_j5fadnr wrote
Any tips for writing romantic moments,guy?Cuz this is pretty good
Amariel777 t1_j5falpk wrote
To quote Douglas Adams:
"But, thought Dirk, what god? And why?"
LimeSkye t1_j5g7rzm wrote
Oh, I’m loving this! I would definitely read more.
PixieKat4x4 t1_j5h53qy wrote
Ngl I would read the hell out of a book like this. I am genuinely in love with the chemistry you've created in such a short time.
Insane_Idiot27 t1_j5hlehy wrote
>"Yeah, well, fuck 'em." I shrug. "They didn't spend thirty years under a perception curse that prevented them from seeing anything positive about the world."
POV: you have depression and you didn't expect to be called out at r/WritingPrompts of all places
MrRedoot55 t1_j5gbr7x wrote
Cool.
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