[deleted] t1_j32auso wrote on January 5, 2023 at 3:59 PM

Reply to comment by BurgDweller in [WP] Life is simple, peaceful and quiet. You're enjoying life living just on the outskirts of the city. You keep such a low profile no-one should even know you exist. So why did the doorbell ring? You hesitantly answer. by Crystal1501

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Crystal1501 OP t1_j32ej1w wrote on January 5, 2023 at 4:22 PM

Wow... it sounds like Tom REALLY wasn't aware haha, probably used to women being into him. I say that because he genuinely seemed to think it was all a game. The ending confused me slightly... did she keep the body? Did no-one investigate?

BurgDweller t1_j32fn74 wrote on January 5, 2023 at 4:29 PM

Tom was definitely a bit dense...to say the least. Chris kept the body (as her new friend...trauma perhaps) and had done such a good job (for the most part) of hiding her location that nobody had found out what happened to Tom, at least for the time being.

Crystal1501 OP t1_j32g6jo wrote on January 5, 2023 at 4:33 PM

Ah, ok

BurgDweller t1_j32gqos wrote on January 5, 2023 at 4:36 PM

I'm very new to writing, so honest feedback is always welcome! Thanks again for reading :D

Expert-Pomegranate-8 t1_j32thjd wrote on January 5, 2023 at 5:53 PM

Goddam i felt uncomfortable reading this.good job

BurgDweller t1_j32tsmq wrote on January 5, 2023 at 5:54 PM

Thank you!....I think lol