Crystal1501 OP t1_j32ej1w wrote on January 5, 2023 at 4:22 PM

Reply to comment by [deleted] in [WP] Life is simple, peaceful and quiet. You're enjoying life living just on the outskirts of the city. You keep such a low profile no-one should even know you exist. So why did the doorbell ring? You hesitantly answer. by Crystal1501

Wow... it sounds like Tom REALLY wasn't aware haha, probably used to women being into him. I say that because he genuinely seemed to think it was all a game. The ending confused me slightly... did she keep the body? Did no-one investigate?

BurgDweller t1_j32fn74 wrote on January 5, 2023 at 4:29 PM

Tom was definitely a bit dense...to say the least. Chris kept the body (as her new friend...trauma perhaps) and had done such a good job (for the most part) of hiding her location that nobody had found out what happened to Tom, at least for the time being.

Crystal1501 OP t1_j32g6jo wrote on January 5, 2023 at 4:33 PM

Ah, ok

BurgDweller t1_j32gqos wrote on January 5, 2023 at 4:36 PM

I'm very new to writing, so honest feedback is always welcome! Thanks again for reading :D

Expert-Pomegranate-8 t1_j32thjd wrote on January 5, 2023 at 5:53 PM

Goddam i felt uncomfortable reading this.good job

BurgDweller t1_j32tsmq wrote on January 5, 2023 at 5:54 PM

Thank you!....I think lol