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BurgDweller t1_j32gqos wrote on January 5, 2023 at 4:36 PM

Reply to comment by Crystal1501 in [WP] Life is simple, peaceful and quiet. You're enjoying life living just on the outskirts of the city. You keep such a low profile no-one should even know you exist. So why did the doorbell ring? You hesitantly answer. by Crystal1501

I'm very new to writing, so honest feedback is always welcome! Thanks again for reading :D

Expert-Pomegranate-8 t1_j32thjd wrote on January 5, 2023 at 5:53 PM

Goddam i felt uncomfortable reading this.good job

BurgDweller t1_j32tsmq wrote on January 5, 2023 at 5:54 PM

Thank you!....I think lol