Submitted by Blackrose_920 t3_10ou3el in WritingPrompts
Deathpaloma t1_j6ja5b4 wrote
"Oh hi there Steve" he says calmly, whilst the sword is held against his neck.
"Hello Morgan, I see you have found yourself in a another picle". You try to act calm, as if you hadn't even noticed he hadn't called you in years.
"Guards!" You hear a voice comming from a throne on the other end of the room "take the intruder"
"Oh she is very pretty! You say with a lively voice What did you do this time?" Your voice going down to a more agressive tone.
"Uhm so... I kind of pissed off a goddess"
"A what?!" You sigh. As the dozen guards come your way with golden spears. Before any of them can touch you though you dissappear before their eyes and re appear sitting in the arm of the goddess's throne.
"ok, come on what did he do?" The woman seemes more annoyed than surprised with your presence and without reply she tries to stab you in the belly. You hold her blade firmly yet gracefully.
"Hey...cowboy calm down. I am much more of a counselor than a fighter, so let's not do that, as you are still holding her blade tween your hands you make it dissappear. Let's talk this out... did he try to steal from you? Did he kill anyone you loved? Anyone you hated and wanted to kill yourself?
"Worse!" She utters in a terrifying voice.
"He broke my heart"
"He what?" You say under your breath
"And now he must die"
"Oooh, wow... wait a minute there tigress. You can't kill him just cause the relationship didn't work".
"Look I get, sometimes you are in love and things don't work out, you feel heartbroken, like you can't go on without him, or that if you can't have him no one else can"
"Shut it"... you feel a gust of wind come over you and press you against the wall "you have holded this trial long enough, you friend must now die"
You try to dissappear, but your powers don't work...
(To be continued if I have time)
wandering_cirrus t1_j6llhn8 wrote
Ooo, a response in second person! Second person POV can be quite fun to explore. Good luck if you decide to continue!
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