Submitted by itsmeyohacker_0811 t3_xyuuk7 in dataisbeautiful
tilapios t1_iriuy06 wrote
Interesting graphs. I felt I learned a lot more about this pizza place than I was expecting. Some suggestions:
- Why the dots at the top? It makes the title really hard to read.
- The pizzas in the background at the top are fine. They become distracting when trying to read the graphs below.
- All the text is too small, and yet the overall visualization still feels really cramped.
- The two figures between the pie charts look really out of place, probably because you've put them on top of a vertical line that separates the orders from the sales. (Yes, I get that those charts have both sales and orders on them.) That vertical line is also not centered, which gives the entire visualization an unbalanced feel.
- You don't need five significant figures in the percentages. Two is probably enough. Anything past three is overkill.
- In the quarterly profitability graphs, you don't need four significant figures on the tick labels.
- The minor ticks on the busiest hour graph are unnecessary.
- The text in both the busiest day and time graphs are unnecessary. It's plenty obvious from the graphs which days and times are the most and least busy.
- What do you imagine winter pizza to be? What does a brunch recipe at a pizza joint look like?
itsmeyohacker_0811 OP t1_irqaymg wrote
Hey, thanks for your feedback. Really appreciate your help.
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