The intro was a pleasant surprise. You hold the notes pretty well. I thought the mix was really good up until 0:38, then i feel like the vocals could be compressed a bit more and having the low end EQ shaved a bit more. But honestly, it's very modern and pretty well written. I think a song like this could be popular. You should try to get it on some "Vibe." or "Modern chill" playlists if you havent yet. You should keep writing dude, i think you've got a bright future in music.

I produce hip-hop too, so if you get a sec, here's me taking back my power from a harsh life.