Ytridm - Winter girl

https://youtu.be/r88X_lVGxOo

its really similar to Lil Peep, but sounds unique, I made the beat as well, its a kind of a magical song about meeting your special someone on a cold winter night in a park, but it doesnt have a happy ending, it has no ending, we dont know if the guy in the story ever found the girl

I would be really interested in your critique