What was that one thing that just went too far and was too much? The thing that friends look and you and go, “That was what was too much for you?
For one thing, I try to ignore anything involving NYC subways written by people who have likely never ridden a subway. Seriously, there are maps online to get the facts right. There could be witches and werewolves riding the train, but if a 2 train is riding the Brighton line, every other detail about the scene will be forgotten. I’d prefer they made up station names and lines to that.