Commander_Night_17

Commander_Night_17 t1_j5e7t78 wrote

Reply to comment by [deleted] in [WP] For ages the dragons & humans coexisted. Humanity waged war amongst themselves & built sprawling empires. Eventually the dragons tired of it & unleashed their furry. Humanities conquests came to a halt & became enslaved by the dragons to build grandiose castles befitting their new masters. by [deleted]

chuckles

It's dragon fluffing time

(Most dragons are written in history to be horny, horny creatures)

P.S. Just for you, Imma gonna save this and in a week or so drop a story

YOLO

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Commander_Night_17 OP t1_ixxsp3b wrote

Reply to comment by Airyn16 in [WP] For the 5th time in these past three months, You a princess has been kidnapped by the dragoness. Your best friend a Knight has come to rescue you, fighting the dragoness, But wait they seem to have goof chemistry? and she's flirting with him, how in the world is he not noticing this?!?!? by Commander_Night_17

Wow this was really well done and I'm pleasantly surprised this did not go the romance pathway.

May I however Ask whether the setting is similar to that of ancient asian country such as China of the Han dynasty or Korea. The naming, use of poleaxe and the use of Yian and silk as a currency?

All in all great work, thank you for trying the prompt and have a great day

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Commander_Night_17 OP t1_ixx29q1 wrote

Reply to comment by UntakenNameFtw in [WP] For the 5th time in these past three months, You a princess has been kidnapped by the dragoness. Your best friend a Knight has come to rescue you, fighting the dragoness, But wait they seem to have goof chemistry? and she's flirting with him, how in the world is he not noticing this?!?!? by Commander_Night_17

Haha happened to us all I suppose.

I'm glad you had fun, I'm just happy you tried the prompt.

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Commander_Night_17 OP t1_ixx0z98 wrote

Reply to comment by UntakenNameFtw in [WP] For the 5th time in these past three months, You a princess has been kidnapped by the dragoness. Your best friend a Knight has come to rescue you, fighting the dragoness, But wait they seem to have goof chemistry? and she's flirting with him, how in the world is he not noticing this?!?!? by Commander_Night_17

This was a good take on the prompt, I had written it such that the princess figured it out only at the 5th attempt and pulled a wingman.

Also props for making this dude dense and having a hunch, nearly all of us men don't act on the signs

Have a good day writter

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Commander_Night_17 OP t1_ixtmgit wrote

Reply to comment by TheReturned in [WP] The knight can't believe it, his Noble steed from the Royal Stables, capable, loyal, who went on so many adventures together, just transformed into the princess. She remembers it all and she has something to say to the knight by Commander_Night_17

First of all I'm glad you tried the prompt.

I also like how you made your knight stoic and bold and ebjpyable to read.

You're a really good writter, I hope I reach your level someday and I really enjoyed this.

P.S. Poor Bart, mans got such poor luck

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Commander_Night_17 OP t1_ixsw3u3 wrote

Reply to comment by TheReturned in [WP] The knight can't believe it, his Noble steed from the Royal Stables, capable, loyal, who went on so many adventures together, just transformed into the princess. She remembers it all and she has something to say to the knight by Commander_Night_17

Oh don't be disheartened

Try to your own take on it

You'll be surprised how well it'll go

Here's to hoping I see your attempt

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Commander_Night_17 OP t1_ixr2m2o wrote

Reply to comment by poiyurt in [WP] The knight can't believe it, his Noble steed from the Royal Stables, capable, loyal, who went on so many adventures together, just transformed into the princess. She remembers it all and she has something to say to the knight by Commander_Night_17

This was what I was expecting, though not in poem

As with any good poem I read it back a few times to make sure it was all good.

I like that she wants to go on adventure again too

Nicely done

I look forward to all the others

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Commander_Night_17 OP t1_ity86bw wrote

Reply to comment by NBfoxC137 in [WP] For 4th accursed time in the past 3 months, you the princess has been kidnapped by the dragon. Your best friend, a knight has once again come to rescue you. Wait a minute, they seem to have a really good chemistry?. She's flirting on him ?. How is he not noticing this?!?!... by Commander_Night_17

No worries it happens to the best of us

You've got a great start so far

Though if you want to try again I'd love to see it too

(My bet was that despite the princess and dragon trying to tell him that the dragon's into him, the guy would be written as dense as a anime MC)

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