It was almost perfect in my eyes, only issue my dumb brain could see is that gold isn’t that strong, but it is useful. Replace it with titanium or mithril (if you want something fantasy) and you’ll be golden. I can’t help you with spelling or grammar errors as my brain glosses over them. Thanks a lot for using my prompt.
Really good stuff. Sorry I took so long to thank you properly for making my brain fart a reality. I was very surprised to get any response. Thanks again and keep it up.
I’m not familiar with with your previous works as I am new to the writing side of Reddit but I really enjoyed this! Thanks for using my self indulgent prompt. ( :D )
Mr_PizzaCat OP t1_j1w23s1 wrote
Reply to comment by TenNinetythree in [WP] - Each Fantasy Race sees themselves as Adventurers and Pioneers. But they each go in different directions, Humans long for the skies, Elves journey over the vast open surface, and Dwarves know in their hearts that the true mysteries lie deep below. Each faction thinks they are right. by Mr_PizzaCat
Not in the slightest I am not smart enough for that.