Very nicely done!
A lot of personality in the text and a clever way to describe the bloodsucking character. Also you manage to put quite a lot of information in a very short amount of time.
And The spiderman reference is very well done too x3
*Chefs kiss*
Really nice short!
Text is both concise and very flavorful! It has an almost professional tone, feeling like the internal monologue of someone older and giving the idea of a vampire that's been around for a good 200-300 years.
The rationalization of his actions does a great job to show a sliver of humanity through the character trying to rationalize them as cold practicality. Very good job on this!
flintoxicated OP t1_j6ntaac wrote
Reply to comment by Local-Program404 in [WP]A vampire that selectively targets drug dealers and criminals because they know those people would be easy targets that wont warrant an investigation is confused to find out that the people of the city believe them to be some sort of vigilante that is ridding the city of crime. by flintoxicated
Very nicely done!
A lot of personality in the text and a clever way to describe the bloodsucking character. Also you manage to put quite a lot of information in a very short amount of time.
And The spiderman reference is very well done too x3